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Amy is a stereotypical teen.  This is shown by the clothes she wears.  She is wearing baggy jeans while the rest of the cast are wearing smart farm workers’ attire.

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Amy is a stereotypical teenager which is shown by her bright coloured clothing .  She is wearing baggy jeans and  while the rest of the cast are wearing smart farm workers’ attire. This shows that she is younger from the bright yellow clothing that she is wearing.

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